Improving Trailer

As the trailer is nearly completed I have watched it through multiple times and decided what parts need improving and adding in. 

For example, I have noticed that as the clip runs through, this section of the trailer skips a part and the stalker disappears. This looks unrealistic and shows a problem caused during the editing as the video shows a dramatic cut of the stalker from the video. I will edit the trailer and take this part out as I feel it is not needed anyway. 
I hope by doing this, it will improve my trailer and give it the realistic effect i have intended. Also, it will keep it looking as professional as possible.

Another part i am going to improve is this part where the stalker is scrolling through the victims Facebook and pictures. I am doing this purely to improve camera work as i have noticed when watching this part of the trailer, the camera is moving about quite a bit which makes it hard to concentrate on what the trailer is trying to show the viewing audience. 


I am also going to be adding new clips into my trailer to improve it and try and get the best grade possible. I am planning on adding in daylight scenes as the trailer contains only clips in the dark. Using daylight scenes will imply to the audience how long the stalking has been going on for and also how extreme it actually is. These clips will be placed in between the clips with the text shown on them.

Clips we are going to add in include:
The stalker watching the victim at her home
The stalker watching the victim walking to places
The victim tied up and trapped after being kidnapped. 

By including these clips i hope to make my trailer as gripping and as interesting as possible so the audience are left wanting to watch the film after seeing the contents of the trailer.