Improving Clips

An improvement i made was making the font on the black screen as big as possible. This makes it a lot more attention grabbing to the viewing audience and creates more of an effect whilst watching. As you can see the font is a lot bigger and stands out much more. I feel this will draw the audience in to the film as they will be asking themselves these questions i have  placed in my trailer keeping them wondering why the man is stalking her.

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As well as this change to font size, i also shortened the longer questions asked on the black screen so that they fit onto one line. This again, creates more of an effect on the audience when they read the rhetorical questions as they are short and snappy drawing them into the film.

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